We're working on scenes in class. Everyone has two scenes with two characters. The scenes that we're doing leave room for making your own ideas about the characters and dialogues.
My first scene is about a senior (Lexi) confronting a freshman (me) about the freshman's senior 'boyfriend,' Bobby, with a reputation for disrespecting his 'girlfriends'.
My character is named Lucy. She's 13. Lucy is bubbly, popular, and kind. She started dating Bobby a week ago. She knows about Bobby's reputation, but doesn't believe it at first. Lucy behaves shyly and keeps to herself around strangers. She behaves secretively about how she's dating Bobby, because she's a private person.
I made Lucy experience many emotions at different times during the scene to make it realistic. I delivered Lucy's lines as curious in the beginning of the confrontation. This makes the scene realistic, because someone would want to know more about the person they're dating and the person who knows about them. I delivered my lines in the scene's beginning as confused, since they'd never talked before, despite being familiar with each other, which is a realistic relation between upperclassmen and underclassmen. During the conversation, I express how shocked and upset she is about the senior talking to her about her relationship. It's realistic, because it's unusual to talk about it with a stranger and the fact that Bobby is a jerk would be upsetting. When the senior asks Lucy about how far the relationship has gone, I express feeling angry, embarrassed, uncomfortable, and mad in my next lines. It makes the scene realistic, because someone would feel these emotions when confronted about your relationship by a stranger. I say my lines at the end seriously, because Lucy is going to confront Bobby, which needs her to be serious, making it more realistic. I chose to make the lines after the first mention of Bobby dating freshmen and after the senior's story about the girl who attempted suicide as more naive, since this information changes a lot about what she already knows about Bobby and it increases the realism.
Lucy has two motivations in the scene. During the whole scene, she wants to learn the truth about Bobby, making her keep asking questions, and confront Bobby. The other is she's trying to help other girls who are dating Bobby, as she plans to confront him while he's with another girl.
My other scene is about the relationship between Bruce (Linsey), who's in a box, and Stacy (me), his friend.
Stacy is 15. She's nice, confident, accepting, and friendly. She has known Bruce since she was 7, after befriending Laverne. She behaves as a shy person. She behaves like herself around Bruce as they're very close and serves as a support system for Bruce.
I made Stacy have different emotions and qualities during the scene to make it more realistic. I made Stacy honest when she talks about Bruce in the box, which increases the scene's realism because people usually tell the truth to their friends. I made Stacy surprised and curious when she finds Bruce in the box, which makes it realistic, because it's unusual for someone to be in a box and people would wonder about it.
Stacy has several motivations. She wants to comfort Bruce about being in the box throughout the scene. She also wants to share her feelings about Bruce. She also wants to help comfort him about his life.
My characters are Stacy and Lucy, which you should remember them, because they'll be part of my next blog post when I reflect on scene work. Bye!
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